I can't hear what your trying to say since the background music overlaps your voice. You need to work on having a mixed balance of neutrality in your tracks so people can actually judge it accordingly.
You get 2 stars for trying.
Can do D:
I can't even hear half the words your saying. It would help if you speak a little bit louder with confidence in your voice then maybe I can understand what your trying to say. I would recommend getting a better mic so I don't hear those muzzled sounds coming from my speakers, that's just annoying. 1 star for actually trying to 'sing' but your voice isn't cut out for singing. That's the harsh reality you have to face, sorry.
Oh well. =/
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